Tuesday, March 4, 2008

'An Abridged Fantasy'

He was sitting outside her door. Waiting.

Fiddling with configurations of his digital wrist watch. Wishing, If time could move past.. the ordained hour.
One could tell, he was a man of action, not used to waiting. His lack of patience was evident in the way his eyes would glance at the wall clock every few minutes and the rapid tapping of his left foot was evidence enough of his nervousness. He had loosened his tie and his hair was standing up, almost a home now for his stray fingers as they browsed through, in anticipaton. The worry etched on his face was almost seeping into the room, every tense second engraving lines on his face. If one was morbid enough, they could see him ageing... second by second.

He had been waiting for this moment for almost an year. The perfect time when he could be someone's Knight. The thought of finally taking the jump, the responsibility of another life. But the gravity of his responsibility had taken time to sink in. He was scared.. he would be a fool to not admit that, but more importantly.. he was eager! All his instincts assured him that he would not fail this. He will always take care, 'a commitment for life'.
The slight hum of the Air Conditioner was still keeping him company but his ears were attuned to pick up only one sound. Her cry... or the opening of a creaking door.

It must have been only another 15 minutes, those which felt like ages to him. The door creaked open, and he turned around.

"come in Sir"..

He walked in.
She handed him his baby in his arms.
As he gazed with proud tearful eyes at his wife, he could not believe how wonderful it felt, as his fantasy... came to Life!

5 comments:

The Keeper of the Keys said...

Beautiful---
"come to life" esp

listen. you're the Harry Potter fan, right?
You might want to check out this

And last I came to your profile, you were doing hp fan-fic? isnt it?

AakASH!!! said...

heyy well etched situation. And fantastic template!

Anki said...

@Keeper of the keys:
Thankyou for the link, I will definitely check it out..
and the last story was the only fanfiction that I have written till date.

@aakash: shukriya

humbl devil said...

nys one...
loved it...

seems like you observed someone and wrote this piece...

Anonymous said...

Keep up the good work.

Unconditional Love